The car crash
I woke up but I was in a car I was confused but I remember why I was in a car, it because we are going to Cape York but it was night we went up a high way we took no notice the sign and crashed I woke up again but this time I was in a hospital my mum said I broke my arm in the car crash.I was in
Such shock so I asked my fo a cup of water and I felt much better.we didn’t end up going to cape york but after my arm was better we went to Hawaii I loved it so much!
Hi Rocco,
I like your story, but you are missing some punctuation in your paragraph, and capital letters. Overall the idea of the story is nice. You can read mine at https://msptaszniksclass.blogspot.com/2020/03/we-took-no-notice-of-signs.html
Hello Rocco, I like how you started your story. The “but” you used in the first sentence immediately signalled that something unusual was going to happen, e.g. that you weren’t in a bed but a car. I think your idea for your story met the challenge appropriately. Just be careful with punctuation and remember capital letters for proper nouns.