Clunk! The back of the car slammed down, we’re visiting a farm for five weeks.
It is so big and foggy that I got a shiver up my spine and I was scared, after having dinner the sun was setting and was so beautiful that I forgot about it.
But then I saw a shadow running across the field so I jumped under my bed.
The next day I went out to search around but something pounced on me and I saw the same shadow.It was the creature
And when I look up it was just a dog, after that my parents said I could keep him and he was my best friend and I named him Benji.
This was an interesting story with a happy ending. The ending is a surprise but a good one. I’m a real fan of dogs. You were able to create a scary mood at the start of the story by using words like: big, foggy and shiver. Well done.