It was the day the day I got my new horse. I leaped out of bed got dressed and put on my new boots. I went outside to see my parents attaching the trailer. I asked dad if the trailer was attached so we could pick him up. Luckily he said yes. I jumped into the car and couldn’t stop thinking about him. As we pulled up to the driveway I saw him he was a beautiful black mustang. I hopped out of the car and asked if that was him the old owner said it was. I jumped in excitement. As we loaded him into the trailer I asked if I could ride him they said yes so I jumped onto his back and rode into the distance as it got dark I disappeared into the night and I started to head back but I was lost…
By Miley
Hi Miley,
I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
I loved the sense of excitement throughout.
But Oh! That ending! I wasn’t expecting that!
What next I wonder?
Good work this week.
Keep writing.
Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
Cork.
Ireland
https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/