The very fuzzy bear

The Fuzzy Teddy Bear

 

There was a really really cute and fuzzy bear that was living in a house on the edge of a cliff. One day that bear was going on an adventure through the Birdsville track to the town. It would take him two weeks to get there so he had to pack. So he went to get all his stuff, but when he was getting his stuff ready he heard someone talking and picked him up and the mum said he is not ours we have to go …but it was so soft that I can’t let him go so I had to say good bye.

 

 

One thought on “The very fuzzy bear

  1. Hi Ryan
    Well I did not expect the ending of your 100WC! I was intrigued with the idea of a bear going on an adventure, then to have it turned round so the bear was actually a toy was quite different. Well done tricking the reader in that way!
    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

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