The old house

Dear Diary,

I was looking in side of a very old house witch was over 100 years old. There was a door witch said keep out! And I was very tempted to open it and I had to see what was inside so badly. I could hardly keep my self from looking inside. So I thought and thought and I decided to go inside of that door when no one was looking. Finally I can look inside of the door 3! 2! 1! Open… as I walked inside I could see golden stuff every where and it was so beautiful and shiny.


One thought on “The old house

  1. Hi, Emmy! This is an interesting story. I like how you wrote the thoughts of the character as they were thinking if they should open the door – that part is suspenseful. Great job!

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