Dear diary,
Yesterday I had my first dance concert my mum said”
That Fluffy can go on stage with by dance class’’
I got my red scooter from my room and then I got to my dance Studio Just in time. I saw that they put concrete on the stage. My class goes on at 7:00. 7 o’clock just hit. And I did a solo then I saw my mum talking to my friend mum. But I saw her watching. The audience Fellasleep when the hip hop was on. After the show ended I was sad because everyone Did’t say that you were good. But I sill got to go home on my red scooter.
Hi ella i realy like your story dance class it was realy good from lily🦄🦋🙂
Hi Ella,
Well done on your entry this week. I like that you wrote your story like a diary entry. Don’t forget to read over your story before you publish to make sure you pick up any little mistakes.
I felt sorry for the character because nobody told her how great she was at dancing.
Keep up the great work.
Ms Brennock
Team 100 w/c
Dublin, Ireland