My motorbike is a good motorbike. It is the Best jumping motorbike. But one day I crashed . if only the bike was a bit smaller I wouldn’t have crashed. I was not happy but I was Determined to keep on going. My dad was proud of me. I was to. It was A good time . It was muddy . I was determined To win. But it was a good time. a trailer came by to pick up my motorbike.
It was the Best ride I could have. It was an excellent jump though I thought.
Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Lucas. I found the personal tone engaging. The use of short sentences made me wonder if you were representing your thoughts? I also liked the way you included a moral in your text. Remember to re-read your text before you publish – I think there are a couple of runaway capital letter typos in your text. I hope I get to read more of your writing.😊