The orange duck
One day there was an orange duck sitting in the pond eating oranges. The duck had been born with this disease. He was only 9 years old and his name is smiley because he never smiles. One day the duck was feeling really sick he went to the doctor but the doctor did nothing about it. The duck was very sad and he had no friends. He was lonely. Everyone hated him because of his orange skin. One day the duck was eating some Crickets. He was getting really fat and unhealthy and sadly passed away.
The end
Hey there Ryan, Libby here. I think this is amazing! The descriptive words and everything! A question I have is what would happen if he ate cucumber? Great job! LIBBY!!!!
He would turn green
Hi Ryan,
Your story is very sad, as the duck has no friends and is feeling ill. It was also very sad that the duck died in the end. Don’t forget that names, even for ducks, get a captial letter!
Keep rising to the challenge.
Ms Brennock
Team 100 w/c
Dublin , Ireland