It was a Saturday, I said, “lets go shopping.” So we went, then I said, “Although it was Saturday nothing was opened.” So we went home. Then I thought we can buy stuff on line so we did. We made lots of stuff. While the others were having fun I just started to thing about my mum and my dad they’re still on their walk. I said to my self I hope they’re ok. My puppy Rusty started to bark, we all jumped with surprise. Then a BIG KNOCK just started, we jumped again. The door opened, it was my mum and dad. I said, “the shops are opened? They said, “yes. “So built a big tent.
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Hi Ella,
What a great idea you had in the story about shopping online. Something funny is that this actually kind of happened in our small town last week. There was a fire at The Warehouse which is kind of like Target in your country. I went to town on Saturday morning to get my daughters birthday present and it wasn’t open!! So I ordered it online.
Keep up the great writing,
Mrs Horan, Team 100WC, Morrinsville, New Zealand.