It is 5am and the birds have all ready sang good morning
To everyone in the street. “Sweety, it’s time for school,” mum said. So I came
Down the stairs and got dressed . “BEEP, BEEP,” went the bus
So I ran outside and got on the bus and then I saw a pink giraffe and
I said, “what on earth!” Then the bus stopped and I got off the bus
For school and then there was a really dusty old building. I
walked inside. “Owww!” I stepped on a nail and it was really painful
Then I past out…
Emi,
Good job! I like the story, and it sounds like a place I went before. Keep on writing!
Jp.