This is a story about a girl called Crystal. Crystal was a nice, kind and average girl who had some eating problems you see she didn’t want to eat things that she saw because her brain told her that she didn’t want to eat it when she hadn’t even tried it. So when someone told her this is good in my opinion she would say “It doesn’t matter what you think, does it?” Just so the person knew that she didn’t like it.
By Kayla
Hi Kayla,
I really like the name of the main character in your story, as well as, the way you used the prompt given!!! Try separating your sentences with more full-stops.
All the best,
Miss Milena, a teacher at BIS Belgrade