Once upon a time there was a guy named Finn, he lived in a village and was the protector of this village. He had a choice to make weather he used leather or iron armour, Finn was having trouble making this decision sitting around the table with his friend Geoff. Geoff said to Finn will if it was up to me I would choose leather armour, but it isn’t up to you is it said Finn so it doesn’t matter what you think, does it?
Geoff looked at Finn and laughed and said then choose Iron problem solved. By choosing the iron armour Finn was able to protect the village and save the day.
Lucas
Hi Lucas, this story is excellent because it shows a good thing about real friendship. Even though Finn’s answer could seem a bit hard, Geoff simply laughed rather than sulking or getting annoyed. I really liked this aspect of your well written and structured story.