Dear diary today my favourite scarf was destroyed. I was on my scooter riding to my house from school I see my red scarf on the concrete. It used to be fluffy but now it is really rough. I begged my mum to get me a new one but she just ignored me. After school my mum said if you really like that scarf make it yourself. So for the past weeks I’ve been working so hard, then it happened my dog started chewing it and when I told my mum she pulled out a new one. I danced and danced and at the end of the day I was happy.
I love the storey
I like how you explained the scarf how it was sooooooooo fluffy to being rock hard
Hello! I think it was meant to be that you received a new scarf. I really like how you double up the bad things happening to your scarf. It meant that the excitement at the end seemed so true. Using danced and danced (repetition) worked well too. Well done.