Dear diary
It was my birthday yesterday and I got a red scooter with fluffy hand grips my parents told me to ride it on concrete only because it was not like a bike. So I rode it on concrete but the concrete was broken and stuff. I tripped over a pebble on the concrete and grazed my knee. I was alright but my scooter wasn’t it had lots of dents and scratches and scrapes. I could get a new paint job because it was all gone but I couldn’t repair the dents and scratches.
Hello, your story is really relevant to me at the moment as a friend came off her bike last week and has a broken wrist as well as lots of bruises. Her bike had a few dents too. I really love the description of your scooter. It would have been really cool. This description makes it clearer how bad the scooter must have looked after the accident. Well done.